2. Converting Your Dot Points into a Product Review

Although we have a lot of information at this point we don’t want a review that is totally made up of dot points so we want to form those dot points into sentences and paragraphs.

So what I do is grab each of the dot points I created and form them into coherent sentences. Take a look below to see how I converted each dot point into sentences and paragraphs. I also create a heading for each list of dot points.

Here is my list:

15.6 volt NiMH cordless drill

• The number of volts is one of the most important components of a cordless drill.
• The greater the volts the faster the motor spins and therefore the more powerful the drill.
• The downside with having too many volts is that the battery will be heavier and therefore the drill will be heavier.
• Most consider the Ni-MH battery to be one of the best for cordless drill use.
• Compared to NiCad batteries, NiMH batteries last longer.
• NiMH batteries are also lighter than NiCad batteries.
• NiMH batteries have a quick recharging time.
• The Panasonic website mentions that for this cordless drill the battery charges in as little as 55 minutes and also features a 5 minute emergency charge.

And this is how it turned out:

How Many Volts?

One of the most important components of a cordless drill is the number of volts. The greater the volts the faster the motor spins and therefore the more powerful the drill. It does have a downside however in that generally the more volts you have the heavier the battery and therefore the heavier the drill will be. So you need to keep this in mind when choosing a drill. Think about whether you will be using it for long periods. If so, you don’t want anything too heavy – you will really be feeling it by the end of the day.
This Panasonic Cordless drill is 15.6 volts making it quite powerful but still lightweight at 4.8lbs so that it won’t put undue pressure on your wrist.

It’s all about the battery…

This drill uses a Ni-MH battery which is considered one of the best for cordless drill use. Compared to NiCad batteries which are commonly used in cordless drills, NiMH batteries last longer and are lighter. They also have a quick recharging time so you can get back to your job much quicker. According to the Panasonic website, the battery charges in as little as “55 minutes…and features a 5 minute emergency charge that charges the pack to 15% of its capacity”.

If you compare the dot point list with the final result, you’ll notice that there really isn’t too much difference between them. I’ve added a few extra words here and there but basically it’s fairly similar.

This is why you should always use this dot point method if you have trouble writing reviews. It makes the process a lot easier when you chunk it down like this to start.

Let’s take the next lot of dot points and do the same thing.

This is the list of dot points:

½ inch cordless drill with keyless chuck

• The keyless chuck means you that can hand tighten the bits so you don’t need extra tools to do it.
• Most cordless drills have a 3/8 inch chuck whereas the Panasonic has a ½ inch chuck. This means that larger drill bits can be used giving you greater flexibility.

And this is what I came up with:

Size Does Matter!

The Panasonic EY6432 Cordless Drill has a ½ inch chuck. You will generally find that most cordless drills have a 3/8 inch chuck. What this means is that you can use drill bits that are up to ½ inch in diameter giving you greater flexibility.

The keyless chuck means you can hand tighten the bits. You won’t need to be searching for tools to do the job. This makes it quick and easy to change the drill bits.

Now we just need to continue on with this process until all of our dot points are converted into sentences and paragraphs.

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